Friday 2 July 2021
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Hello Hamish, I'm Lucy from Paroa School,
ReplyDeleteThis post looks really cool because of the photos of moons. There are a few things you should change though. First of all, the writing or background needs to be changed because you can't read some of the words. Second, you should add a caption so people know why you made this. Keep up the great work!
Lucy