Holes
This term room 4, and me are reading a book called holes its about a boy called Stanley. After a bad day at school Stanley was walking home then suddenly a pair of shoes fell from the sky he ran the police cough him, and he had a choice to go to jail or camp green lake he chose camp green lake...
after a nine hour buss drive he was there. He met a man in a shed, and he said you must call me Mr sir and you will dig a hole 5 feet deep and 5 feet wide you will sleep in tent D NOW GO!.
he looked for ten [D] he found it he went in and met some boys they said that's your cot you have to sleep in it its, and barf bags hes in hospital he got bit by a rattle snake.
Stanley started digging a hole and after five hours he had finished then he went to bed, and did the same the next day and the next day and next.
THE END
I like how for the names like Stanley have a capital letter and before the full stops- by Lilley
ReplyDeleteHi hamish, nice blog post. Maybe check through you post again, I found a couple of missing letters and capital letters. I like how you included Mr sir and how nasty he is.
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DeleteHey Hamish, Good job with adding most of the important info and not dragging it on! good job!
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ReplyDeleteNice blog Hamish. I like how you added the important stuff and how deep they had to dig. Nice job. I found some missing letters and no capitals after a full stop.
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