I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
hello hamish, I'm Miro from Paroa School in Greymouth This has great information, I learnt more about Titanic. Maybe next time you could explain to people who don't know what Titanic is what it is and what happened to the ship.
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Hi Hamish I never knew anything about the Titanic so i learnt a lot
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Maybe next time you could explain to people who don't know what Titanic is what it is and what happened to the ship.
Kia ora my name is Jacob. I like how you said where some of the stuff on the boat are. Maybe next time you could say what it is and how is crashed.
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