Wednesday, 23 May 2018

All About Me

Hi my first name is Hamish.
I am 10 years old.

I am a year 5.my favourite food is fijoa. I love writing.
I live in Otaki.
My favourite sport is soccer.

I have one fish one bird and six cats.                                                                                                                                        



2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Hamish,

    Welcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.

    Vicki

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  2. Ki ora Hamish your work is really cool and it expresses who you are.
    I also like playing soccer as well! Also I really love writing like you. I also like playing soccer as well! Also I really love writing like you. Maybe you could organise the sentences because it would be easier to read. Good job and bye.

    From Drew

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. 
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that  lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.